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and finally : Y/N
          	
          	ok to be fair the 3 im listineg (in my opinion) are actually written really well and i enjoy them alot. 
          	
          	1st "A heart in a machien" SO this one i will say encoprates there Y/N very nicely and have them make sense. So i spoil little. Y/n is engiener for elliots, meets V and the rest. becomes good friends, slowly(painfully but beatifly)becomes "attached" to V.. cyn happens and thats where ill end it.
          	
          	Now before i say the next one i wanna say a lot of good things, This story introduces Y to V and the rest BEUTIFULLY. they dont become insta friends but grow over time. and there relationship with V is well established and thought out. and on copper-9 they dont just have some stupid OMG moments. all the moment beutween him and the cast in my opnion are really done well. especially him and V. The ONLY crataik is that nothing changes because of him, but even then they give the WHY really well and you cant be mad at it.

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2nd "UNFORCENE CONSAQUENSES" now like before i enjoy this story so i wont spoil too much. So y and Tessa know eachother sense young so they see eachother as b and s. and yada yada copper-9. Now this story has all the same events as the origanle but adds so much inbetween too the point it feels like slice of life. Theyt do there arks great and dont give the answer too soon. Also they have many great moments with the cast and write compeling mysteries. 
          	  
          	  Now aghain Nothing changes dispite Y's inflowneces. while things happen they usally feed into the MD story. 
          	  
          	  3rd "Fangs" this story is GREAT. even thoegh i want to rant about how great it is i dont want too take away anything from it. So all ill say is they change,
          	  
          	  haha i lied. This story shifts the preames into biolgy expermints yet they still work. Instead of just saying "OH there human-ish" They build on the fact thata they are humabn expermint. they have charecters backstorues change yet still slot in perfectly. They have charecters that arint just throwaways or random names. (except 2 no 3 of them) and best of yet. They dont follow the story. They focause around the charecters instead of just there surondings. they dont ask for a bigger picture thry instead focause on who is in it. and sure somtimes it can be fustrating  somtimes on why they do what they do but all you need is to read and it's done.
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and finally : Y/N
          
          ok to be fair the 3 im listineg (in my opinion) are actually written really well and i enjoy them alot. 
          
          1st "A heart in a machien" SO this one i will say encoprates there Y/N very nicely and have them make sense. So i spoil little. Y/n is engiener for elliots, meets V and the rest. becomes good friends, slowly(painfully but beatifly)becomes "attached" to V.. cyn happens and thats where ill end it.
          
          Now before i say the next one i wanna say a lot of good things, This story introduces Y to V and the rest BEUTIFULLY. they dont become insta friends but grow over time. and there relationship with V is well established and thought out. and on copper-9 they dont just have some stupid OMG moments. all the moment beutween him and the cast in my opnion are really done well. especially him and V. The ONLY crataik is that nothing changes because of him, but even then they give the WHY really well and you cant be mad at it.

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2nd "UNFORCENE CONSAQUENSES" now like before i enjoy this story so i wont spoil too much. So y and Tessa know eachother sense young so they see eachother as b and s. and yada yada copper-9. Now this story has all the same events as the origanle but adds so much inbetween too the point it feels like slice of life. Theyt do there arks great and dont give the answer too soon. Also they have many great moments with the cast and write compeling mysteries. 
            
            Now aghain Nothing changes dispite Y's inflowneces. while things happen they usally feed into the MD story. 
            
            3rd "Fangs" this story is GREAT. even thoegh i want to rant about how great it is i dont want too take away anything from it. So all ill say is they change,
            
            haha i lied. This story shifts the preames into biolgy expermints yet they still work. Instead of just saying "OH there human-ish" They build on the fact thata they are humabn expermint. they have charecters backstorues change yet still slot in perfectly. They have charecters that arint just throwaways or random names. (except 2 no 3 of them) and best of yet. They dont follow the story. They focause around the charecters instead of just there surondings. they dont ask for a bigger picture thry instead focause on who is in it. and sure somtimes it can be fustrating  somtimes on why they do what they do but all you need is to read and it's done.
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ok now with:  OC's insert but nothing changes
          
          1st SO there is a story called (something) and it has the charecter N2 where omg N was getting a replacment but in the end this n2 deciedes not too kill N for "He a good boy".  So the story goes on with the classic story and the only diffrence being N2,And the rest other then N, Dealing with Cyn and her attempts too concujer copper-9. Also for some reason V is attracted too them instead of N, also also  shge gets controlled by cyn. and all in all the ending is still the same.(ALSOx3 the creator makes a contiune story where instead of repeating the MD story with the main cast they do it whith there kids)
          
          2nd "3 doors down" Ok now too be fair, this one is actually written ok and incoprates a Oc. but the problom still lyes of, nothing changes. I wont spoil too much but, charecter becomes main cast, becomes DD cause why not. And thats all ill say.
          
          3rd (idk0

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actually the 3rd is "Scrapped Drones" while the main charecter is intresting thet litterally just pop in from time to time and slowly/suddenly become well liked. and guess what, Nothing changes
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Ok so im ramble about Murder drone storys for a big minuet so i will slpit it in three parts. 
          Part one: Random inserts+ love story
          
          So i have run across a fair share of storys Thatt add some OVERPOWERD, RANDOM, AND WOMEN CATURE, INSERT charecter and im tired of it. 
          
          1st Like there was this one story i bielieve called "The last one" (i could be wrong but i dont care enogh too search it up)  Where for some fukin reason there was this guy who had the solver,uzi loved him, and was able too use it  BETTERR THEN CYN. 
          
          2nd There is this othere one where Neo metal sonic was basically the guy and he had every girl fighting over him, AND he alwaysed had a "OH NO my sister Uzi And mother Nori(i think) Are in trouble. Time to transform! WHAAAAAA" the guy never worked for anything and still one all the time. 
          
          3rd It was called Male Cyn, where, as you guested, Male cyn exsist. For some reason he lives on copper-9 as uzis little brother and he just POWERS THRU EVERYTHING!! Literaly he just snaps his fingeres or fights for 0.0000000000000001 seconds and the problom is solved. Or he fucks offf and lates the story happen but turns out hes secretly plotting something, what that is, IDK. infact we never know. and in the end he fightes Cyn, turns off her solver and for some reason wipes everyones memories of him and fucks off forever.
          
          also in like all these stories doll was just the only one who put up a challege vfor some reason

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I just got a message from Wattpad saying I have a comic that is promoting self harm? And that they deleted that story about it…..
          
          ?-? Idk where that happened but if you see this check if both my stories are still here

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???? I’m confusion 
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I can’t believe this but I somehow didn’t realize I posted my latest chapter on my SCHOOL docs for the WHOLE staff too read. AND NOT ONLY THAT. IT WAS A SMUT CHAPTER. 
          
          AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 
          
          im gonna kill my self 

Circuit_the_drone

Thank you for adding Prototype to your reading list! I never imagined that it would get this kind of attention ❤

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Hey if you could can you critique my comic
            I’m a new too writing so I need it  
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REALISTIC_ALT

It’s a great comic
            How could you not
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Riot64813

Yo i appreciate you reading me and whisperingwell’s story brother, i hope you stay tuned cause there’s more to come

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Hey can you check out my other one
            I will say it’s definitely not as cool as my Murder drones version though
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Riot64813

@Bosndjxjs I will since you are reading me and whisperingwells’s story. It’s the least I can do for ya as an appreciation of your loyalty 
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