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and finally : Y/N ok to be fair the 3 im listineg (in my opinion) are actually written really well and i enjoy them alot. 1st "A heart in a machien" SO this one i will say encoprates there Y/N very nicely and have them make sense. So i spoil little. Y/n is engiener for elliots, meets V and the rest. becomes good friends, slowly(painfully but beatifly)becomes "attached" to V.. cyn happens and thats where ill end it. Now before i say the next one i wanna say a lot of good things, This story introduces Y to V and the rest BEUTIFULLY. they dont become insta friends but grow over time. and there relationship with V is well established and thought out. and on copper-9 they dont just have some stupid OMG moments. all the moment beutween him and the cast in my opnion are really done well. especially him and V. The ONLY crataik is that nothing changes because of him, but even then they give the WHY really well and you cant be mad at it.

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2nd "UNFORCENE CONSAQUENSES" now like before i enjoy this story so i wont spoil too much. So y and Tessa know eachother sense young so they see eachother as b and s. and yada yada copper-9. Now this story has all the same events as the origanle but adds so much inbetween too the point it feels like slice of life. Theyt do there arks great and dont give the answer too soon. Also they have many great moments with the cast and write compeling mysteries. Now aghain Nothing changes dispite Y's inflowneces. while things happen they usally feed into the MD story. 3rd "Fangs" this story is GREAT. even thoegh i want to rant about how great it is i dont want too take away anything from it. So all ill say is they change, haha i lied. This story shifts the preames into biolgy expermints yet they still work. Instead of just saying "OH there human-ish" They build on the fact thata they are humabn expermint. they have charecters backstorues change yet still slot in perfectly. They have charecters that arint just throwaways or random names. (except 2 no 3 of them) and best of yet. They dont follow the story. They focause around the charecters instead of just there surondings. they dont ask for a bigger picture thry instead focause on who is in it. and sure somtimes it can be fustrating somtimes on why they do what they do but all you need is to read and it's done.
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