Doctor Red

I had a fun time with that fic, little horny for my taste but that might be because I'm tapped out right now, so thank my wife for the lower rating it
          It was silly at points but hey it made me laugh 6/10

I don't usually review stories I dropped or don't have anything positive to say about 'em, but that story was ass
          Fem!Ren is one thing that threw me for a loop and its the only interesting thing that happens in the first few chapters, the MC is to say the least overpowered and keeps pulling new abbilities out his ass
          No like 2/10

A sith dies, A huntsman rises
          Oh boy do I have words for this fic, absolutely amazing beginning, volumes one through three are really well done, and then curse if RWBY it gets worse after the fall, but only in the usual split perspective issue gang reunites things happen and then, what the fuck? God is that you, here to fuck up my fic? Yes, yes he is. Everything after volume five is a clusterfuck with half of volume five also being a clusterfuck so much shit just happens because "The Being" makes islt happen, random timeline shift, Pyrhaa's revival, Ahsoka Tano's appearance, Maul's appearance and force-bonding to Oscar; there are quite literal deus ex machinas all over the latter half of this fic
          With that rant out of the way I did enjoy it and give it a 6/12, its a little bettwr than 5/10 but not really

You rock my world, by Mecury Sol
          how do i put i like older women and it has a narrative that interests me in words about a one-shot turned four-chapter mess of a fic, i don't know its to early 6/10 give me part 5 and it'd be 8/10

Some good memes, great moments, and a satisfying solution to the whole Salem problem that isn't rewriting her or reverse corruption

I feel like schizoposting reviews on fanfic isn't the best way to get people to follow me, but on the tiny, tiny chance one of the authors checks out my page and looks at my review for their fic and takes my review as constructive critisism rather that just me being a dick, then it's worth it

Givin' that one a 6/10, it felt a bit short but it was still narritviely satisfying for the most part

Very good, a little rushed near the end, but the ending was sweet enough and I've a soft spot for fluff so 7.5/10

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