RED_Doctor

"The human prophet" its ok. I liked it 7/10 for silly monstergirls, though I do have one question, why was that one Vtuber here?

RED_Doctor

Izuku Yagi- All for You
          ,,,this story has me conflicted. Incredibly strong start love the primary theme being hope will prevail but it became kinda a slog to read in the last four chapters and that isn't the fics fault but it does taint an otherwise really good ending, all in all 8/10 but probably deserves 9/10

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I don't usually review stories I dropped or don't have anything positive to say about 'em, but that story was ass
          Fem!Ren is one thing that threw me for a loop and its the only interesting thing that happens in the first few chapters, the MC is to say the least overpowered and keeps pulling new abbilities out his ass
          No like 2/10

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A sith dies, A huntsman rises
          Oh boy do I have words for this fic, absolutely amazing beginning, volumes one through three are really well done, and then curse if RWBY it gets worse after the fall, but only in the usual split perspective issue gang reunites things happen and then, what the fuck? God is that you, here to fuck up my fic? Yes, yes he is. Everything after volume five is a clusterfuck with half of volume five also being a clusterfuck so much shit just happens because "The Being" makes islt happen, random timeline shift, Pyrhaa's revival, Ahsoka Tano's appearance, Maul's appearance and force-bonding to Oscar; there are quite literal deus ex machinas all over the latter half of this fic
          With that rant out of the way I did enjoy it and give it a 6/12, its a little bettwr than 5/10 but not really

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You rock my world, by Mecury Sol
          how do i put i like older women and it has a narrative that interests me in words about a one-shot turned four-chapter mess of a fic, i don't know its to early 6/10 give me part 5 and it'd be 8/10

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I feel like schizoposting reviews on fanfic isn't the best way to get people to follow me, but on the tiny, tiny chance one of the authors checks out my page and looks at my review for their fic and takes my review as constructive critisism rather that just me being a dick, then it's worth it