I’m sorry if my feedback is in anyway kind of harsshh. I actually just want to point it out cause none of my readers did back then not until I grow up and find it cringe worthy and unpublish it and start from the scratch over and over again. I actually want to help and for you guys to patch the loopholes I might find. I’m not here just to vote for you — I’m here as a reader who enjoys every bit of your creative world. ˙⋆✮
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Greetings! Could you please spare a little of your time by reading the prologue of my book? Just give it a try, and if this isn’t your cup of tea, then it is fine. I just need some honest critique for me to improve my writing style. I would appreciate it so much if you’d leave some honest comments too. Thank you.