MaynardFuggent

RJ, Great! After reading, please, vote and if still interested we can continue. As for now, please, read Angeled Pt1/2 of my The Creeps psycho-horror series. What would you like me to do? Thanks for the help, Maynard

RJwritten

@MaynardFuggent I can definitely see an improvement in your descriptions and pacing. Keep up the good work!
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MaynardFuggent

@RJwritten I've looked into your suggestions and would you read Angeled Pt1/2? I think I've slowed it down and added more description. Let me know, please. maynard
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MaynardFuggent

RJ, I appreciate the comments and I see exactly what you mean...if I were doing a novella. With these 1500 word shorts pace and description do suffer. But check out the novella Ludwig Platz Reunion and you'll read the difference as pace and description are stretched. Hope to hear from you. Thanks, Maynard
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MaynardFuggent

Hi! RJ, your profile water painting reflects the classics, as I enjoy writing in short story form. I wonder if you'd like to critique one of them: Angeled and I will do the same at your choosing. Let me know, please. Thank you, Maynard

RJwritten

@MaynardFuggent I'd love to help! :)
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