RLAyers

Could someone give this a quick read and tell me what you think? I'm not sure I want to finish it. I have quite a bit of it started and can't sleep for the story running through my head. I'd just like to get some initial feedback to see if it's worth my time.

RLAyers

Could someone give this a quick read and tell me what you think? I'm not sure I want to finish it. I have quite a bit of it started and can't sleep for the story running through my head. I'd just like to get some initial feedback to see if it's worth my time.