RLWhite4

I'm so sorry that I was offline for AGESSSSSSSSSSS firstly it was Christmas period for me and I was having a break, just enjoying the new year, Christmas and the rest of it when after new year my wifi went down and I couldn't write anything but overall I kind of lost the spirt to write felt like I had no imagination. But I'm back :D 

RLWhite4

I'm so sorry that I was offline for AGESSSSSSSSSSS firstly it was Christmas period for me and I was having a break, just enjoying the new year, Christmas and the rest of it when after new year my wifi went down and I couldn't write anything but overall I kind of lost the spirt to write felt like I had no imagination. But I'm back :D 

RLWhite4

Hiya! I was wanting to know if my stories are good enough so some feed back would be great! :D 
          
          (To do so please comment on one of my stories) 
          
          
          So please say things like:
          
          Do I have enough description?
          Is my spelling good?
          Do I need to include more similes,metaphors and alliteration
          ETC
          
          Thank you! :D