I have noticed a lot of comments in my old book, which was "The Princess of The Orient Seas"
so here we go again
"Why did Japan touch her with no consent?"
again this is a mistake I did. I was a child, and it was very naive of me to do Japan dirty like that, especially Nekomi (idk cat version of Japan???).
"Why did you use barley and wheat? it's only used in Ancient Egypt"
Very stupid of me not listening to history, I know there were other stuff like a little technology, but no there wasn't because I was stupid.
"Why didn't Phil Aborted the child?"
she has no knowledge about abortion, again she was a mermaid and abortion are not really legal, or don't have a professional to abort the child.
yet again, I'm really sorry for all the mistakes I did on the book. I'm making up for it by doing a better one, andd thank you all for criticism too, I really appreciate it!