@Keita_Kazuka yeah a lot people have problems with writing harems bc they don’t know how to create a relationship between each character and usually just of “oh he is hot I wanna fuck” stuff like that but reading ones like yours were you are actually building a relationship with each girl is really refreshing
I’m really glad my fanfic caught your interest! Please let me know what you didn’t like about it so I can improve, and what’s your opinion on chapters 19, 20, 21, 22 and 23?
@Keita_Kazuka yeah a lot people have problems with writing harems bc they don’t know how to create a relationship between each character and usually just of “oh he is hot I wanna fuck” stuff like that but reading ones like yours were you are actually building a relationship with each girl is really refreshing