Rachaelkxx

Hi guys.
          	Would really appreciate some feedback on my newest chapters.

Rachaelkxx

Hi guys, 
          My book The chosen has a few new chapters. I would appreciate the feedback on my book as i continue  with my writing.
          This  is my first book, and i appreciate any feedback i can get to improve my writing skill.
          I hope you. Have enjoyed my book so far and will continue to read it as the story progresses.

Rachaelkxx

@Generic-Book-Worm hi thanks so much for your feedback. Can you private  message me to discuss more about the characters. Thanks
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Generic-Book-Worm

It’s really great for your first book! One thing I used to struggle with when I started writing was the structure of the plot- as long as you have the framework in mind, then the story will just flow. As for your story- I’m enjoying it quite a bit so far. The only thing is maybe flesh out the characters a little more, for instance, Drake. There was quite little I saw in the earlier chapters that hinted at his sudden change in personality.
            
            And also, paragraphing and sentence structure could use some work.
            
            Nevertheless, I like your style of writing, and the description is excellent!
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ddokvv

hi! can you please explain what this is? https://www.wattpad.com/1306203223-white-tigress-bookclub-form/comment/1306203223__1679430160_46e17a68e3 
          i was thinking about filling it out but i didnt really get the password thingy and other stuff, so im kind of confused on what it is

Rachaelkxx

@ddokvv they will write under your comment with a book for you to review as a trial. You need to do 3 inline comments and one final comment with there hashtag on just the final comment. There hashtag is in the chapter of how it works in the book. Hope that helps.
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ddokvv

@Rachaelkxx hmm... still little confusing though, ok so i if fill out the form what do i do next?
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Rachaelkxx

@ddokvv they put you in pair every time theres a new round. Its three chapters in your partners book. It explains more about it in the how it works section in there book
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JSwritess-

Hi! Thank you for the follow back, hope you enjoy reading my new book <3

JSwritess-

@Rachaelkxx 
            I definitely will check yours!
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Rachaelkxx

@juri444 likewise I will give it a read hope you enjoy mine also and feel free to leave some feedback thanks
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