Hi Guys, just fixed punctuation and grammer :). i will upload in about an hour or maybe will late till tomorrow after school. But thanks for your comments and ill make sure i keep upto date with punctuation and grammer.
Hi Guys, just fixed punctuation and grammer :). i will upload in about an hour or maybe will late till tomorrow after school. But thanks for your comments and ill make sure i keep upto date with punctuation and grammer.
@RachelDowds Yes! Don't take it too hard but please put correct punctuation and spaces. Other than that, I think your plot is AMAZING and I think it's getting somewhere! :D