Rachel Smith

@Deandelacruz Thanks! I have a general idea but I can't fully get the idea across of their personalities. I read your post about how to make good characters with objects and things, so I'll post my list like you had, I could really use your advice on it.

Thanks for voting for me:)

I have redone a Mindless Sight from Chapter two and on. it sounded sort of random and cluttered so I took a different path, hopefully it will make the story flow better.. any comments on it would be appreciated. =)!!

no comments make me sad =*(

Thank you for adding my story to your library and becoming a fan:)

I know my two books have similar traits but don't worry, the characters, plot, and story line, couldn't be  more different. 

Thank you so much for adding my story to your library

Thank you so much for fanning!!!

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