Rachiesayshey

Hi just wondering if you had time to look over my own stories? It would mean a lot. I would shout out your book, get you more followers and stuff like that. Please?

Hello, random person I've never met before, Here's a free corndog!

I everyone!!! I've updated Default. Please give  it a read and a vote if you liked it.:D

I updated Default at last sorry it took so long. Please check it our:) xxx

I just updated Default please go check it out:) xxx

Thanks so much I really appreciate you taking the time to give me advice :)

Your story has a lot of promise and your characters are engaging and lifelike. With some editing, you'll have a good start for your novel.
          
          Point for improvement: Choose either the past or the present tense. It may seem easier to write in the present, but very few experienced writers can even get away with it.

@EmmaLainge I only saw that there sorry!!:) and when ever you have time:) thanks so much I just really want this story to be a success so any advice  would help:) xxx

Thanks for the follow! Enjoy The Heart of Deception when you get to it. I still have a few critiques ahead of yours in the queue,  but I'll slot Default right in there.
          
          Keep in touch.
          
          Em

I'd like to say a huge thank you to beforeitends for the amazing cover for my new story Default:) also a big thank you to everyone  who entered they were all soooooo brilliant:D <3