Rae_the_way

Hello everyone, I have a favor to ask. Most of you know about my book/fan-fiction ‘Poor Girl’, (Naruto fanfic). I know that I put a pause on my story for a long time, then came back (after correcting a few things) ...  I would appreciate if EVERYONE would give me feed back on what is wrong with it of if there is something I should change.
          	
          	Thank you

DiyaNarang1

Hello 
          
          Can you give my new story one chance if you are free just read the description of my story and if you hate description just quite it and if you like description pls give one chance and read part one and if you like than pls vote and comment and yes my story is not so chissy 
          
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Rae_the_way

Hello everyone, I have a favor to ask. Most of you know about my book/fan-fiction ‘Poor Girl’, (Naruto fanfic). I know that I put a pause on my story for a long time, then came back (after correcting a few things) ...  I would appreciate if EVERYONE would give me feed back on what is wrong with it of if there is something I should change.
          
          Thank you