Raffesia

Hello every Mahabharat lover!
          	
          	I know this story doesn't appeal to you much, but I request you to give this chapter a try. 
          	
          	I mean I tried to write the Supreme one's love story, it was very debatable for me. But I did it!
          	
          	Crazy me, I know. But please leave a feedback. I would like to hear your thoughts on this.
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WhisperedInks

“Hey!  I just wanted to share something fun I’ve been working on — it’s a story on Wattpad about drama, friendship, and a little bit of accidental romance. 
          If you’re up for it, I’d love for you to check it out, vote, and tell me what you think! Totally cool if not, just thought you might enjoy it. 
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Khanderayani

Hey dear , I wanted to share a few thoughts while reading and hope you don’t mind. Please make sure Nakul remains only Drisana’s husband, with no remarriage or involvement with another woman. I also hope none of the Pandavas or Karna remarry and that all take an ek-patni oath.
          Since events are changing, it would be beautiful if instead of chausar they play chess, which Drisana likes. This time the Pandavas win and demand complete political and family separation from Hastinapur—severing all ties forever, declaring war, and asking Hastinapur to never contact them, seek favors, or propose marriages. They ask Pitamah Bhishma to be released, Ashwathama freed from all ties, and Anga, Panchal, and Indraprastha to be declared independent.
          To add emotional depth, after the sabha all the queens’ families arrive and take their daughters away, holding the Pandavas responsible for risking their wives’ and children’s future. Dwarka takes Subhadra and her children. Sivi Naresh takes Devika and declares her a Sivi princess, not a Suta. Kashi Naresh takes Valandhara. Draupad with Dhrishtadyumna and Panchal royals takes Draupadi. The Dravida royal family, with Drisana’s brothers and sisters-in-law, takes Drisana and also brings Dushala, severing all ties with Hastinapur.
          Duryodhana confesses killing Dikshit’s lover and covering it up. Dravida declares that if Hastinapur wants Dushala as their daughter-in-law, all ties with Dravida must end forever. Hastinapur accepts and Dushala leaves. For Vijaya, Balarama and Krishna claim her kanyadaan, take responsibility, and treat her equal to Subhadra.
          All families state the Pandavas failed to think of their wives’ and children’s future and reputation. They take their daughters and grandchildren away, sever all ties, and ask them never to show their faces again. Even if the queens hesitate, they leave for family honor. These are just my thoughts  I hope you’ll consider them and I’m eagerly waiting for your response ❤️

Khanderayani

Darling it's been nearly getting one and half year please update next part soon dear... We're eagerly waiting for your response... Please give us your response of your next update... Please give us a message... We'll be eagerly waiting for your response... Please make it soon...

LekhikaNeeti

Hey, I’m really sorry if I’m totally off the mark here...  I’m not sure if you’re accepting reading requests right now, but it would be so awesome if you gave my book a chance. ✨
          
          If you like it (or if it makes you feel some type of way), go ahead and hit that like button! And seriously—don’t forget to share your thoughts in the comments. I LIVE for those opinions. They matter more than you know! 
          
          Thanks a ton for your time, and I apologize for dropping by like an unexpected plot twist! 
          
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