RagingRiver

Sorry I've been away for such a long time, everyone. I know this probably doesn't mean much seeing as I don't post a lot of things on here, but I've recently been studying for school and the like. XD I haven't been writing a lot of stuff lately, and most of the stuff I've put up here is actually kinda old. So, I'll try to finish some of my newer works, and post them as soon as possible. Thanks, and sorry for the delay!! >.< Sorry for being so disorganized!

RagingRiver

Sorry I've been away for such a long time, everyone. I know this probably doesn't mean much seeing as I don't post a lot of things on here, but I've recently been studying for school and the like. XD I haven't been writing a lot of stuff lately, and most of the stuff I've put up here is actually kinda old. So, I'll try to finish some of my newer works, and post them as soon as possible. Thanks, and sorry for the delay!! >.< Sorry for being so disorganized!

Fallgirlxox

Your comments are what I look forward to everyday, you can tell you are a great writer and person just by reading them!!!!! I just wanted to say thank you and I appreciate them!!!!  Oh, I also just updated, and this one is more positive than usual!!!!! (I thought you would be proud ;D)

RagingRiver

@wintergirlsnow I'm not a great writer. XD if you read my work, you can tell I really need improvement. And I'm not being a great person or anything like that, I'm just stating the truth. But I really appreciate the sentiment, and I am glad that you have something to look forward to. I'll read the next updates as soon as I can, and I hope you have a merry Christmas! ^_^ or rather, happy holidays.
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RagingRiver

An example of my poetry. 
          
          It's totally insane,
          All this pain,
          Wracking my brain,
          At the sound of your name,
          The tears won't stop falling,
          My heart won't stop calling,
          IT HURTS! 
          IT HURTS! 
          God, why won't the pain stop?
          My searing heart just won't drop-
          Out of my chest,
          Unlike the rest,
          I can't stop loving you and my heart will always be there,
          I want you to know, goddammit I still care!
          
          Love me, please, but I can't hear you,
          Touch me please, but I can't feel you,
          It's unbearable, the pain inside my heart,
          And it is TEARING ME APART! 
          
          One day, I know, I'll join you where we belong,
          And until, my heart stops beating so strong,
          I will fill these pages,
          Throughout the ages, 
          Of the love my heart holds, 
          And As our story unfolds,
          I just want you to know, 
          With you is wear I wanna go. 
          
          (I still love you, Adrian.) 
          
          ----
          
          So, yeah. That's a small peice of my story. Uh, I know it's not the best kind of poetry, but if you like it, please let me know, and I'll post that story as soon as it's up an running! :D thank you very, very much and have a pleasant day!

RagingRiver

Hello, I was just wondering if anyone liked my poetry? 
          
          I've posted some raps and the like up here under the name "Raps of The River," and so far it looks like no one's really interested in them. 
          
          And, if I'm going to write this new book, I'll need poetry. If my poetry sucks, I can't very well go out and write from the perspective of a lonesome, pining poet, can I? Well, I could, but then the poet wouldn't be a good one. 
          
          Would it be all right if I could request you check out that book for me, and get you to tell me what you think? If that isn't enough in the handful of chapters, I have some more in my database, and I'll post it if I get some feedback. 
          
          I just want to know that if I write that new book, I'm not wasting my time because I have droll and ghastly poetry skills. 
          
          Thank you very much, and have a pleasant day! ^_^