Ragingslayer62

Thanks for taking my advice rage
          

I have just updated the book massively with a suggestion by tayrob11 to make the first part, instead of stabbing him burns him. But I adapted the main plot a bit to make it fit the dark horror it is, and I believe the new ending brings on just as much suspense!!!!!!

Canker 

Advice I think he should torched Tom before killing him
          

Hey guys i've got a lot on now but i will be updating 'The Brook' thanks for the support