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Stories by Rien Kofmin
Lines II
I'm older now, and have over 200 pages of noise in the first Lines, so I'm transitioning to a "sequel&qu...
The Man in the Library
A man is going through a brutal divorce, and the stresses and woes of that storm bring about a bizarre nightt...
Lines
A mess of stuff that won't fit elsewhere. Some are pretty absurdist, no direct continuity unless stated (doub...