shikawa_43

Hey! I just dropped a new story and I’m trying to improve my writing. If you get time, I’d honestly love your feedback:
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403290785?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=shikawa_43

shikawa_43

@Rahat_4 Thanks! I'd love to know your thoughts after you read it . 
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Rahat_4

Will try to read ❤️
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Rahat_4

Update aaj nahi dungi, kal dungi Eid ke din rulate nahi hai **crying emoji** ❤️

Rahat_4

@PearlMurphy-Hooriya hehehehehehehehehe just on its way 
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PearlMurphy-Hooriya

@Rahat_4 Oh god aisaa trauma wale update kyuuu (╥﹏╥)
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Rahat_4

I feel like putting down both raabta and ruh-e-siyahzaad because literally I’ve had to clear the same thing. Many times. It actually hurts when u clarify it yet u get a comment saying “this is uncomfortable according to their age.” Bhai mere papa inke jitni umar me logo ka sar phod ke ghar pe aate the *skull emoji* means that boys sometimes do have early age maturity even my cousin brother has something like that but I feel frustrated and everything is just going down 

Rahat_4

@ShamaAnsari709 thank u so much ❤️❤️❤️
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ShamaAnsari709

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@Rahat_4 Hey never do that ok....i love your stories bro....jst ignore who said this shit to you...ok   i love your writing..bhai aapne already warned kiya h to jo uncomfortable hai nhi padhho na...q kisi ki mehnat pe Paani pherna ... just ignore them mam.. focus on your work and those readers who appreciates your work..bbg.. love you author jaani 
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PearlMurphy-Hooriya

@Rahat_4 Kisneee bolaa??
            Noo its totallyy okayyy write your storyy according to youu!!!
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PearlMurphy-Hooriya

Hey gurlll would you like to read my Story? Ishq-Kaatilana onee! If you'd like to!
          If you can't, No Problem & Thanks❤️

Rahat_4

@PearlMurphy-Hooriya ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Ofcourse u have supported from day one so why not 
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PearlMurphy-Hooriya

@Rahat_4 Ohhh reallyyy?? Thatss soo Sweet❤️
            Thankss a lot (。♥‿♥。)
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