Theiconicstoryteller
Yo, can you read my story elements 12 as I want other peoples opinions to improve
RaidenAmer
@Theiconicstoryteller yeah, but I'm busy though.
Theiconicstoryteller
@RaidenAmer you should have atleast completed reading thr chapter tho
Theiconicstoryteller
@RaidenAmer thanks for telling, but i think i have improved that area over the course of many chapters and if you'd have continued reading then you wouldn't have included ' he pulled his hand out with a crying scream '