@BOTCH_CARA Thank you, that was a passionate story of mine. And as for advice . . . I guess just write. Just get the ideas out, even if its a lump of coal that smells bad, pump iit out while you;re excited about the idea. Then you can polish it, no that's not quite right, let me change this scene, I think I can spice this dialogue up. Aside from that, look at stories you enjoy and take elements from those (legally) that you like. If you like a character's snark, try to make a character snarky, if you like the message, maybe modify it a bit be your own. I was honestly taken aback by this, cause I still think IB: Rise of Raidriar is a smelly lump of coal, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope this helps, and sorry for the late reply