xxLiumxx
Was really liking everyone has darkness till the end the were so many plot hole first off at the start you said this would be a revenge and that's why there was torture and naruto was raped but no there was nothing second the seal on him although it was taking his emotions and using it to fuel his power 90% of his emotion in that seal would have been hatred and when it was broken i expected all that to come out but nothing he just kind of became tame thats also another thing I didnt like about the naruto sasuke relationship with how obsessive he was of sasuke I dont understand why he wouldn't do anything against him later that didn't make sense since in the cave when they met after killing Garra he didnt seem to care about sasukes opinion I was also hoping to see a narusasuke relationship but that not a big deal just a peev of mine this isn't the only stuff just what I remembered overall good story till the chapters after he lost his seal of darkness
Crimson-cracker569
EHD is from fanfic.com by a guy named darthemius he has a sequel which is not finished
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