RaiinbowSocks

@CountingBackwards Hindi! Gosh. O.O Dapat pala binasa ko ng husto yung paper. X) Panu mo naman nadiscover ang wattpad?

BlurryWords

Hey, your welcome for the review :) and as for showing instead of telling, I really am not the right person to explain. I try my best to show not tell but I'm rather rubbish at it. The best thing to do is probably read this - http://www.wattpad.com/543663-a-guide-for-wattpad-writers-show-and-tell
          It's a guide for wattpad writers and it has loads of helpful tips in it but this one chapter focusses on showing not telling and I found it very helpful, you may too :) 
          This guide is also very helpful for show not tell - http://www.wattpad.com/4008053-writing-tools-showing-and-telling