Hello everyone! So as you at or Amy not have seen, I have just gone through and edited Quarantine to some extent. In actuality I only changed the spacing between the speech in dialogue because it was hard to read for some people; but it's still a start. I also changed a couple things that were really bugging me like unexplained statements and stuff. I will be going over more of this stuff as my test readers give me more feedback.
Also I want to give a big thank you to those who have just plain out given me the facts and told me what was wrong with my book and what didn't make sense. I greatly appreciate that you put the time and effort into reading my crazy book in its beginning stages. I promise that I will most definitely fix everything that you have found wrong, I will just be doing it on a chapter by chapter basis. So I will fix Chapter 1's flaws before moving onto Chapter 2.
One finally thing, I haven't been working on writing Chapter 17 yet, but I have good reason. I am currently working on making the first chunk of writing that I have published completely and 100% better than it already is. And by that, I am going back through and reading each chapter, making sure everything lines up the way I want it to. Keeping the story straight and all that before I move on to writing more chapters. This way I won't have a bunch of mad readers because I had to change the story because something didn't fit quite right.
Well, this message is getting kinda long, so I'm going to sign off for now. Love ya all! And thank you for being patient with me.
-Dez