RainSkittlez

I finished!

@RainSkittlez Yep I'm here email it to me

@Dijahboo52 -_- .. I missed you ... Can You Help me out wit Chapter Two PLeassssssssss

Yay! You released it I'm so proud keep up the great work!

:D ... Guess its back to the drawing board.. Thanks... I'll get started....

@RainSkittlez I think it's okay... I definitely think you could do better. I've fallen in love with your writing style because its so blunt and sexy but, I think you're struggling with bridging your story from chapter to chapter, ever chapter can't have a cliffhanger or big climax. Try focusing on each chapter as its own piece of the big picture. I am really behind in editing today... However, your story is my favorite to edit (shhh don't tell anyone) so I try to squeeze you in whenever you contact me. Honestly I haven't read the entire chapter (and it's like 2 pages)  I feel like it your heart wasn't really in this piece. I think it would be awesome if you took a break from thinking about it and came back to writing it with fresh eyes. I'm here for you don't freak out! stay chill :)

@LittleDoesSheKnow  Really , thanks. I' ll try my best because I'm in the middle of updatin a story.
          

I changed it to Bikini !sland , is that okay ,  I thought it made more sense.. @Dijahboo52 

Hey! is beyond the blankets the name of the story I'm editing?

Update Welcome to Eden please! :) I really like it.