RainWolf739

Hi, everyone! I am reopening my review shop for the Summer. I will try to wait before reposting all the old reviews so that wattpad doesn't do the new story alert for every chapter. Also my apologies to anyone who gets tagged for their old review

RainWolf739

Hi, everyone! I am reopening my review shop for the Summer. I will try to wait before reposting all the old reviews so that wattpad doesn't do the new story alert for every chapter. Also my apologies to anyone who gets tagged for their old review

Not_a_guy5068

Hey dude!
          
          I have a question.
          
          The next chapter in Sharptooth War is going to be a funeral for Ducky and the others who died in Tyrant's attack. But I can't figure out a good chapter name.
          
          Any ideas?

ZedoTheHedo

I have Started A New Story Dedicated with RainWolf763 comments  in mind. As he is the motivation and reason i started this story. Therefore he will be credited in the intro. I put all his favorite parts he liked about marcus and shoved them into one long impossible not to laugh story. Markus being Isakai in a game while passing out at his computer. Finding himself now stuck in the virtual world. Now in constant argument with the admin who uses him as entertainment he must beat the game and beat the living hell out of the admin  or try to. Currently on chapter 12. As he requested longer content. And static is on hold for reconstruction as some errors were caught by wolf that needs fixed or rewritten hope this soon to be released story makes up for static being on hold. I need rewrite some future chapters.

ZedoTheHedo

@ZedoTheHedo ummmm I wrote a story that may get banned called The Punchline 
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ZedoTheHedo

@ZedoTheHedo if you decide to accept you will be paid properly 
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ZedoTheHedo

@ZedoTheHedo sorry hiring someone on Fivver to proof read it lol unless you want that job 
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ZedoTheHedo

Now every time your at Walmart and you see the customer service center your think of Marcus 

RainWolf739

@ZedoTheHedo The short stories are fun, But I like the longer stories like Static. The characters and plot are more meaningful, while still having the clever humor as the short stories
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ZedoTheHedo

@ZedoTheHedo should I do more short stories or do you like the longer chapters?
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Not_a_guy5068

Hello RainWolf!
          
          I have come to see how you're doing! How are thee?
          
          Also, I released a new chapter to Sharptooth War if you would like to check it out.

Not_a_guy5068

@RainWolf763 Another chapter is out, and this one is... well, let's just say pretty dark.
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RainWolf739

@Not_a_guy5068 I'm good, thank you for asking. I read the new chapter
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Not_a_guy5068

Should I make it Canon that Sharpteeth are terrified of their wives/mates? Basically, they're the boss, and when their males get a bit out of line or do something dumb, they flee for their lives because their mates scare them and will hurt them.
          
          They're idiots, but they're the female's idiots.

RainWolf739

@Not_a_guy5068 Got it, makes more sense. In my opinion I still think it should be applied to only one releationship, instead of all sharpteeth
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Not_a_guy5068

@Not_a_guy5068 I meant it more in a comedic sense, not actual physical harm. Maybe in a goofy side project?
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RainWolf739

@Not_a_guy5068 I think if it was just one releationship it could work for a part of a story, but I don't like the idea of it applying it to them all
            
            I don't think it is good for couples to be hurting each other and setting that for the standard in the book's sharptooth society would make it so you have to dramatically change preivious books and the current one's plot. 
            
            Sharptooth wouldn't be able to argue with Regina that Tyrant is bad, becuase he would be too afraid of getting killed by her. I don't even think Tyrant would be in charge since he is male in that society
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