RainbowYakuzaFox

Yea...if anyone is wondering whats going on with my stories well its probably cuz i lost my touch on many things since ive been gone .
          	
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immortal-serenity

Hi there! I was wondering if you could read my book The Lone Wolf? I've tried to change the typical werewolf world slightly by adding a few things here and there and well I've been trying really hard and it hasn't yet had many reads so I was wondering if you could tell me how to improve it. I understand if you don't but it would mean a lot.
          It's about a girl who is a lone wolf. A lone wolf is a wolf that is not part of a pack but travels around with their families to work for packs (so not a rogue). It is a bit of a love story but I'm trying to not have that as the main point. Instead it's more about the backstabbing within the wolf world, revenge and the wolf hierarchy.
          Anyway sorry for the long post but I hope you give it a go.

RainbowYakuzaFox

@immortal-serenity so this girl is a rogue but isn't because she sorta is in one? that would help others ...if you add a bit of a lovestory than, the person she helps, depends on you if he would be strong or if she protects him. or a total hottie >~< .
            the thing is, what's the revenge and backstabbimg withing the wolf world about? it depends if her parents were killed and she was all alone in the pack or If something bad happened in her life that happenes to be someone wanting to take her down or something real bad just happened to is what i think .
            
            Email me more details it would be better or you can just dm me here :3
            
            And don't worry longest messages are ze best, I don't know why but it just is lol 
            
            - Awesomeness Rainbowdash at your service!
            and btw im always there to help ,no need to hesitate!! ^3^
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