lucfallen

That's why i haven't written a story i try to and when i read over it, it just turns out to be boring.
          
          let's see... maybe you should have one of her masters try to be nice to her. Like him knowing she is a slave and he shouldn't care. He acts mean towards her just so the others don't look down on him. you know like he is conflicted whether or not he likes her or just feels sorry for her.
          
          maybe one of her masters friends sees her and decides he wants her and steals her.
          
          or she tries to kill her self but gets caught in the act.
          
          hmm maybe she turns out to be an angelic being but finds that out throughout the story little by little. not sure if you want your story going that way.
          
          hope this helps a little:)