Rainedance92

@The_Brave_Oddball  Your story sounds good!
          	

CJCambridge25

HEY I WAS WONDERING IF YOU WOULD READ THIS AND TELL ME HOW IT SOUNDS ITS A NEW STORY IM WRITING
          
          A gathering of small birds pilot themselves into the typhoon of wind blowing through the cheery kingdom. The over joyed innocent diminutive children bewilder around the large fountain chasing one another, every time almost clouting the adolescents into the freezing halcyon water! The children laughed and played until the parents called them in to eat their supper. I stepped back into my room, changed into a suit of armor, gripped my fencing sword and walked out. The hallway strung far down, pictures over lapping one another. I past the trophy case, glancing at all mine and my twin sisters winnings over the years. There must be a hundred, but never mind them, I keep walking down the hall until I reach the entrance to the observatory. There my younger siblings, Max and Jude sat flipping through a fairy tale; a well-known one here in the kingdom of Cadaedon! The fairy tale known as the 6 elements! I have been told it many times, and in fact it is true! A tale of 6 dashing indomitable young adults. A tale of heroism! ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. post your thoughts on my wall please........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................