Raival904

Hey guys. So chapter 5 will be published tomorrow as I was hoping to get it done by the end of today.
          	
          	But alas… I couldn’t as I ran out of late evening time. I’ve also split chapter 5 in two; part 1 and part 2, because the chapter is far too long to be one whole thing. Both parts are still one chapter though, but have been separated down the middle. It’s been killing me…
          	
          	Stay tuned for tomorrow as it still isn’t long now!

vince15502

@Raival904  united confederation of nation and democrary is freedom and liberty, phoenix empire is tryannty and barbarians
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Raival904

@Sithlord863 me too. I’m very excited as well! 
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Raival904

Also, part 2 will be coming later, so there’s going to be some waiting time for that part.
          	  
          	  I’m not doing 40,000-50,000 word chapters. Lol. So to speak,, they’d have a “knife to my neck”
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Decetroy53675

In avatar: war of steel, when the MC has his ww2 tech, he gets a notification saying that he unlocked HOI4 The New Order tech and other things as well, if you don’t know HOI4 The New Order, look it up and see what it is in the mod and what it has and other things in the mod, after getting all HOI4 The New Order tech, he unlocks HOI4 The Fire Rises tech tree and other things in the mode like National focus and national tree, the same thing, if you don’t know what HOI4 The Fire Rises, look it up and see what is in the mod and what it has
          Add this to make your story more interesting and the MC country will evolve with new technologies like Cold War era tech from The New Order mod and modern tech from The Fire Rises mod of HOI4 
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Raival904

Oh I know what it is thanks for letting me know. But I’m actually going to remove the gamer ability in the near future because I want to focus on plot and how he will manage things without those powers.
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vince15502

rayferno904 what about gaang, you can not just left to pain or death they need help waterbender and people earth kingdom too and those people are dying to these fire nation barbarian and imperialism

Raival904

Oh they’ll get saved! In the following few chapters 
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Delta-90

Are two OCs allowed for War of Steel? They could be in separate branches or the same one too, right?

Raival904

You can have two more now; in the navy and the airforce. Captain OCs are probably more recommended as is focus on those pre often than petty officers and mechanics
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MOHU07

Hi, please give my story a chance and read the first few chapters.
          
          Unified W is a fantasy adventure filled with action, mysteries, character growth, and a world that slowly reveals its secrets over time.
          
          As Kai's journey unfolds, he finds himself caught between forces far greater than himself. Every answer uncovers new questions, and every victory comes with a price.
          
          The deeper he travels into the world, the more he begins to realize that not everything is as black and white as it first appears.
          
          If you enjoy stories with long-term mysteries, hidden connections, and characters who are forced to grow through both triumph and hardship, I hope you'll give Unified W a chance.
          
          I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/280601765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MOHU07

Raival904

This looks very interesting when I looked at the desc., but I can think about it. My hands are tied with things I want to do though.
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Kythsunenyko

Greetings. I am interested of this Story. Your world building is excellent. Do you happen to take Docs for my OCs?

Kythsunenyko

Okay. I will only use WW2 Weapons available at that current period before 1946. I shall get to work on Two OCs... Is New Jersey Taken? (Azur Lane)
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Raival904

@Kythsunenyko heheh yah you can, just as long as it’s not a weapon not in the Arsenal Book
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Kythsunenyko

@Raival904 Do you happen to take Custom Weapons...? Such as a BAR With an Extended 30 Round Mag with a Bayonet?
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Raival904

Hey guys. So chapter 5 will be published tomorrow as I was hoping to get it done by the end of today.
          
          But alas… I couldn’t as I ran out of late evening time. I’ve also split chapter 5 in two; part 1 and part 2, because the chapter is far too long to be one whole thing. Both parts are still one chapter though, but have been separated down the middle. It’s been killing me…
          
          Stay tuned for tomorrow as it still isn’t long now!

vince15502

@Raival904  united confederation of nation and democrary is freedom and liberty, phoenix empire is tryannty and barbarians
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Raival904

@Sithlord863 me too. I’m very excited as well! 
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Raival904

Also, part 2 will be coming later, so there’s going to be some waiting time for that part.
            
            I’m not doing 40,000-50,000 word chapters. Lol. So to speak,, they’d have a “knife to my neck”
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Raival904

Hey all.
          
          So word of mentioning. Work on ATWOS has slowed because I am on a road trip right now with my family, but I aim to get the chapter done this week or weekend, or on the first part of next week.
          
          I have managed to fit in finishing up the ATWOS arsenal book. But chapter 5 still remains unfinished. It is the absolute biggest and most important chapter so far because many things are converging onto it that will develop the main conflicts. But I’ve been getting burned out by how long this chapter has become, and I want it to be the best so far as it opens the main conflict. The following chapters will from now on be shorter than chapter 5 as I just don’t want to write long chapters like it. So I think I’m going to try and keep chapters at a limit of 25,000-30,000/35,000 words. 
          
          Chapter 5 is currently almost 40,000 words. And it’s action packed too with some parts that aren’t.
          
          This is a very ambitious fanfic project!
          
          Anyway. The next time I talk to you guys, it will be in chapter 5! In the me time, go check out what’s been added in the ATWOS Arsenal book. There’s more stuff there now and stuff that aren’t mentioned in the story.
          
          There’s a lot of ships, mainly because I theorized the Phoenix Empire has to have an absolutely enormous navy.

Raival904

@vince15502 and yes they absolutely will declare war. There’s— I quote —going to be more than one reason.
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Raival904

@LorenzoFerrari2002 too true. That and Chapter 5 may become 50,000 words max since I’m putting so much into it and that there’s multiple things converging onto it. My gosh… sometimes even I surprise myself!
            
            And perhaps I think I said a little too much in one announcement.
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Raival904

How would you guys feel or think if I made a Blake Belladonna stranded in Texas story at some point?! That’s planned on my list of things I want to write.

Raival904

@vince15502  And I have had a busy and difficult time in college as of late.
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vince15502

@Raival904 i'm still wating you know that
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