Raival904
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Just so you guys know, I made a slight change in chapter 6 just now; I changed the distance Tovey’s fleet is from the CMS Indiana’s, the ocean liner’s, last known position for story purposes to make things happen a bit sooner and help the flow of the story of War of Steel.
Raival904
Hello everyone, it has been abundantly clear that I can't re-publish chapter 6 after a short time and publish chapter 7 at the same time when it has been taking me a while to write chapter 7. I've been getting hit by a waves of crushing demotivated and minor depression, but that situation is being resolved and I feel much better now. And now that I have a way of overcoming it.
Chapter 6 is being republished this morning which should have been republished a lot sooner. I appreciate most of you and your patience!
Raival904
@AgentVick Thanks for understanding! I apologize in advance, I don’t want to repeat this mistake(s)
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vince15502
hey raoval904 were been waiting for chapter in 3 month, what are you taking so long?
Raival904
@vince15502 | assure that it will be published today. It's something that I should have done sooner anyway since I can't keep two promises that overlap with each other! I should have re-published chapter 6 again earlier. But you stop being so pushy and with a complete lack of regard and consider my own well-being and my real life situations. I can deny you access to my stores if I wanted to! But I hear you and I understand you wanting the next chapter. "But you should never bite the hand that feeds you."
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Raival904
@vince15502 No, I think it’s you that is the being impatient, what position are you in to speak for the other readers?? They haven’t said anything yet. But can you try to be a little more patient?? I am aghast by your low patience, considerable disregard, and lack of understanding with my own situation. But I admit that it is my fault for failing more than once to get chapter 6 out again but I intend to re-publish chapter 6 at the same time as chapter 7! But please under and that I have been having personal issues that I am resolving and I promise to get them out to my readers.
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Raival904
Also just to let you guys know, I’ve noticed a problem with Chapter 6 on ATWOS and I’ve been going back to fix some shirt plot points which would strengthen the plot that will lead up to Michael’s character development.
Raival904
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Raival904
Hey guys, so I did publish chapter 6, but I have noticed problems of the chapter that need to be changed and fixed, and there’s a problem with one of the plot points that didn’t come out how I hoped. That chapter has been unpublished for emergency fixes and I will also be going to fix Michael’s character as it seems that my writing of him isn’t as good as I hoped it would.
But chapter 6 will be published within the next few-several days, but I have a celebration for the 250th coming up so it may be delayed. Chapter 5 will stay published even though I will also give it some changes too. The life of a writer means to try to make your story as good as possible! Even if it means unpublishing. And doing updates and changes.
Raival904
Hey everyone I have released chapter 6 of ATWOS! I’m excited but a little nervous to introduce it and show it, I hope you enjoy it! Just so you know, there’s a trigger warning because, in the first chapter, there’s a disturbing part so be aware of that! It’s also kind of necessary for the story’s progression!
There’s also some mistakes and things I want to try and fix, things I found, so you’ll see one more update on the chapter sometime soon.
https://www.wattpad.com/1632185903?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Raival904
Decetroy53675
In HOI4 The Fire Rises, theirs a path called the Cognoscenti path for the Union Of America, their are some things in the path if you want to add like Project Babel and others things if you want to add if or not
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Decetroy53675
In avatar: war of steel, when the MC has his ww2 tech, he gets a notification saying that he unlocked HOI4 The New Order tech and other things as well, if you don’t know HOI4 The New Order, look it up and see what it is in the mod and what it has and other things in the mod, after getting all HOI4 The New Order tech, he unlocks HOI4 The Fire Rises tech tree and other things in the mode like National focus and national tree, the same thing, if you don’t know what HOI4 The Fire Rises, look it up and see what is in the mod and what it has
Add this to make your story more interesting and the MC country will evolve with new technologies like Cold War era tech from The New Order mod and modern tech from The Fire Rises mod of HOI4
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vince15502
rayferno904 what about gaang, you can not just left to pain or death they need help waterbender and people earth kingdom too and those people are dying to these fire nation barbarian and imperialism