Raival904

Also just to let you guys know, I’ve noticed a problem with Chapter 6 on ATWOS and I’ve been going back to fix some shirt plot points which would strengthen the plot that will lead up to Michael’s character development.

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HAPPY AMERICA 250 JULY 4!
          
          It’s been 250 years since our nation was founded in 1776! Our nation was not founded on just any value but godly values and a strong foundation on liberty, freedom, the pursuit of happiness, love, and our very resilience.
          
          Thomas Jefferson wrote this piece of text on the Declaration of Independence to Great Britain; 
          
          —“We hold these truths to be self evident, that all men are created equal.”—
          
          No matter who says otherwise! We shouldn’t let our politics separate us. Rather, we should embrace truth, the truth and not just any version of truth, it would it be true. We should also push for true justice, and not the perverted justice pushed by the extra corrupt. Non-negotiable! Nor should we turn a blind eye to extremists, like the ones who rejoiced in the death of others that don’t deserve it while they and others like them screamed in the streets shouting, “death to America.” 
          
          We live in a country, with a rich history, dark and bright. We are a people of heroes and victors, even if we are not perfect. For this, we are a nation founded on top of a Godly foundation on Judeo-Christianity. Without God, there is no meaning.
          
          “If there is no God, there has never been nor will there ever be any meaning. Truth would never ever be absolute if truth was relative.”
          
          We are one nation under God. God bless America! 

Raival904

And together… we must focus on what actually matters!
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Raival904

Hey guys, so I did publish chapter 6, but I have noticed problems of the chapter that need to be changed and fixed, and there’s a problem with one of the plot points that didn’t come out how I hoped. That chapter has been unpublished for emergency fixes and I will also be going to fix Michael’s character as it seems that my writing of him isn’t as good as I hoped it would. 
          
          But chapter 6 will be published within the next few-several days, but I have a celebration for the 250th coming up so it may be delayed. Chapter 5 will stay published even though I will also give it some changes too. The life of a writer means to try to make your story as good as possible! Even if it means unpublishing. And doing updates and changes.

Raival904

Hey everyone I have released chapter 6 of ATWOS! I’m excited but a little nervous to introduce it and show it, I hope you enjoy it! Just so you know, there’s a trigger warning because, in the first chapter, there’s a disturbing part so be aware of that! It’s also kind of necessary for the story’s progression!
          
          There’s also some mistakes and things I want to try and fix, things I found, so you’ll see one more update on the chapter sometime soon.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1632185903?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Raival904

Decetroy53675

In avatar: war of steel, when the MC has his ww2 tech, he gets a notification saying that he unlocked HOI4 The New Order tech and other things as well, if you don’t know HOI4 The New Order, look it up and see what it is in the mod and what it has and other things in the mod, after getting all HOI4 The New Order tech, he unlocks HOI4 The Fire Rises tech tree and other things in the mode like National focus and national tree, the same thing, if you don’t know what HOI4 The Fire Rises, look it up and see what is in the mod and what it has
          Add this to make your story more interesting and the MC country will evolve with new technologies like Cold War era tech from The New Order mod and modern tech from The Fire Rises mod of HOI4 
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Raival904

Oh I know what it is thanks for letting me know. But I’m actually going to remove the gamer ability in the near future because I want to focus on plot and how he will manage things without those powers.
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vince15502

rayferno904 what about gaang, you can not just left to pain or death they need help waterbender and people earth kingdom too and those people are dying to these fire nation barbarian and imperialism

Raival904

Oh they’ll get saved! In the following few chapters 
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Delta-90

Are two OCs allowed for War of Steel? They could be in separate branches or the same one too, right?

Raival904

You can have two more now; in the navy and the airforce. Captain OCs are probably more recommended as is focus on those pre often than petty officers and mechanics
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MOHU07

Hi, please give my story a chance and read the first few chapters.
          
          Unified W is a fantasy adventure filled with action, mysteries, character growth, and a world that slowly reveals its secrets over time.
          
          As Kai's journey unfolds, he finds himself caught between forces far greater than himself. Every answer uncovers new questions, and every victory comes with a price.
          
          The deeper he travels into the world, the more he begins to realize that not everything is as black and white as it first appears.
          
          If you enjoy stories with long-term mysteries, hidden connections, and characters who are forced to grow through both triumph and hardship, I hope you'll give Unified W a chance.
          
          I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/280601765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MOHU07

Raival904

This looks very interesting when I looked at the desc., but I can think about it. My hands are tied with things I want to do though.
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Kythsunenyko

Greetings. I am interested of this Story. Your world building is excellent. Do you happen to take Docs for my OCs?

Kythsunenyko

Okay. I will only use WW2 Weapons available at that current period before 1946. I shall get to work on Two OCs... Is New Jersey Taken? (Azur Lane)
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Raival904

@Kythsunenyko heheh yah you can, just as long as it’s not a weapon not in the Arsenal Book
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Kythsunenyko

@Raival904 Do you happen to take Custom Weapons...? Such as a BAR With an Extended 30 Round Mag with a Bayonet?
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