Raj686

Sorry guys for the late it's because of my final exams are started.... Don't worry I will be back soon......

TrashyTrashKun

T-T 
          ey, ey, can I just write my review in the comments section or here ah?

TrashyTrashKun

@Raj686 ;] Got it~
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Raj686

@TrashyTrashKun you need to read the 32 chapter then you can see the world
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TrashyTrashKun

@Raj686 Truthfully, the paras really need to be put some work into them. Fixing the punctuation would also do some help and also the spacing too. The prologue needs some tweaking here and there, try to give more life into it ah. 
            
            Do the descriptions. Show readers the world in the story, not tell them the story. Put some stuff into expression, body language.
            
            :)) yup, that's all I can give, I've only read the first chapter so... hehe, sorry bout that~
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love_dine

hello po! if you're not busy po, is it okay if you follow my wattpad account? ♥️ Thank you po! 
          
          I also start writin and I have one completed story. Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/user/dinedc

love_dine

@dinedc ill do that dont worry!
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Raj686

@dinedc please read my book too
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21stMeiracle

Hello, sorry for plugging. 
          
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          Hi Bae, are you looking for something to read? Looking for something new with some twisted plots and lessons? You might like to try my newly published story!
          
          
          Title : ENCHANTED. ( Song Series #1 )
          Written By : @21stMeiracle. 
          
          Story Description ;
          
          — Songs Series #1. 
          
          
          Dreams comes first more than anything else. That is always Sky's motto in life, she is so passionate on becoming a successful fashion designer not until cupid decided to mess up her peaceful life. Being the fake girlfriend of the famous singer, MJ Alderidge, her daily life started to spin up and down as she tried so hard not to fall in the voice of the man who can easily make her heart jump in so much ecstasy they called " love "
          
          
          — STAND ALONE PIECES. ( COMPILATION ) 
          :: A book for all the stand alone pieces that I wrote. Different genres, different topics, different views. I hope you will give it a try. 
          
          
          
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          Your presence is highly appreciated! If you want me to plug or ask for a support back for your story, you can dm me anytime. I will be glad to help. Anyway, here's the link. I hope you enjoy and let's continue to support each other. 
          
          
           : https://www.wattpad.com/story/292509911?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=21stMeiracle&wp_originator=VnoOQ9WEfSD0nZyNQuuFO9N%2FPEGAhRGEi%2FFMsQXDOLpQZvKpQ%2FsXRwSiwzpU3zwsAbL2FhNqh4CRQ6RrSBhUrliQUIkSeex8hRGCFuNRn%2FQyQJ117MreKSZss0XU%2Ft9e 
          
          
           :: https://www.wattpad.com/story/294075002?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=21stMeiracle&wp_originator=IWHrRhDIFLQ30dVw8VcOXp%2FEq0NIY%2BjWBMkBLTBKN2%2FxPDtSc22SAJ6Qxxw6VS%2BXez1XIDFMV0jmX%2F7sAP2SQMpEQBS9Krzwtv%2BDKUA6SLggWZQkUkYI%2By5fNUQkM3Hy

Raj686

@21stMeiracle please read mine to
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