@Rajoshree98
Hey guys, I just uploaded the second chapter- 'Who is he?' Do check it out and tell me what do you think?
https://www.wattpad.com/1475712019?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Rajoshree98
Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!
@Rajoshree98 yeah no problem. I would also love your feedback on my own work (BUT it's not required because it does contain some dark and mature themes)
Title -- Highschool Heartbreaks,
Blurb -- Everyone knows them in town they are the band boy and he is the lead singer. But for her he was the sun and she, the sunshine in a cloudy day. 17y old year Roohi had an massive heart wrecking crush on her school senior, who happened to be that famous guy who never notices her. And all she wanted was to be seen be him and boy does he notice But the question is, is it already to late? Will it be another story the the girl never gets her crush?
https://www.wattpad.com/story/374966773?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Rajoshree98
Do check this out this is the Blurb
Title -- Highschool Heartbreaks,
Pls check this out. It's my first upload.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/374966773?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Rajoshree98
Storyline - It's about Roohi a.k.a. Rue and experience with overwhelming feelings of first love , whimsical friends that would last an lifetime and menacing Heartbreaks....The question is will she survive the her emotions or will she get engulfed in it. And who will she choose the guy she always loves or the guy who loves her. Let's take tour of this emotionally overloaded love story, which I hope reminds you of your highschool days, and your highschool friendships.Or maybe maybe this Will bring enough drama to your currently assignment loaded highschooler life. Do give it a read and feel free to share your opinions.
Hi guys, I have just uploaded my first story Highschool Heartbreaks. Please check it out https://www.wattpad.com/story/374966773?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Rajoshree98.