DaniloBaeta

Are you ready to dive deep into the chaos of the human soul? My collection of scribbled poems takes you on a journey through intense emotions, where desire and mystery intertwine, and where the line between love and suffering becomes blurred. Prepare to feel, question, and maybe even lose yourself in a world where the shadows of the heart grow clearer with every word. If you're ready to explore the labyrinth of the mind and embrace the beauty in pain, come and read. What are you waiting for? The mystery calls you.
          
          
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Romanticanvas

Hey your poems were wonderful delightful easy read
          Here’s some tips:
          As you progress you could make them less obvious about the theme, I recommend some of Sylvia Plaths poems 
          I like such “poignant” poems to infer less and a more open ended and slightly vague so that I can swirl my own happenings and relate them to my own experiences by interpreting them my way
          I know it is a different style but I shall push you to consider it 
          Great debut

Rakshitsri

@Romanticanvas Thank you, I will definitely consider your suggestion .
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Nikhasinghal

Heyy i really want to post my own collection of poems here....can you like guide me how's everything like??and btw I was really impressed by your work

Nikhasinghal

@Rakshitsri sure will do...and best of luck for your journey too I hope you achieve whatever you are working hard for and thanks for you time and patience it might look nothing but it did create a difference into my thinking
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Rakshitsri

@Nikhasinghal No problem buddy, just do what your heart says, don't focus much on what others will think and all . All the best for your journey
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Nikhasinghal

@Rakshitsri the problem is idk if this a good idea or not...sure I love writing but like will I be able to make readers feel what I wanna convey through my poems or what if they are not as good as I think they??tbh I am having second thoughts about this all...but ik one thing for sure that is I really want people to read my poems
            Ik I am just ranting it all but I can't help...so sorry for wasting your time
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