Ram_Gupta_3704

I AM BACK !!
          
          Hello !! I think you still remember me . I got my eye checkup and had lens of -3 power ! I mean it's my first time I am wearing . Yes , I didn't get spectacles before and if I had done it then I think I would have protected my eyes . Though I am a teenage , these mistakes are common , I feared that my laptop would be taken by my parents but that was my stupidity . Still , it is being taken but you may wonder how I am writing this ? The answer is , I take out the laptop whenever my parents are not here and use it by wearing my spectacles for just 10 minutes a day . 
          It's astonishing to see from 6 hrs to 10 min a day ! I am back and the main point is , Kamui is going to explore the unexplored world ( talking about SUSANO ) .

I am taking a break . I don't know how long but this is necessary for my health . For knowing the problem you can visit SUSANO's note for susans , published part , if it is not there , it means I am back !

Thankyou for your feedback on my novel i appreciate it for a true story feedback matters i want to keep it real, i love you work also 

You are a great writer. I began writing when I was 12 and posted a book on Wattpad, and people did point out all the mistakes, and I got discouraged. I want you to succeed because you have LOTS of POTENTIAL! 
          You can use Grammarly or ProWritingAid, they are free. You can edit your book there if you want to.