Brennan Rubow

This story is one I have had in my mind for about 8 years now.  I like the mesages I want to express in it and love the journey of it.  It will be my first one I've worked on in a long time, because of that I have let my writing skills go unpolished.  This is really a good chance to get feedback, get help to know how to write in a way you all will enjoy this as much as I do!  Enjoy ^^ https://www.wattpad.com/story/23408878

Revisioned the prologe.  Its been a long time since i've written and was frankly horrified with how terrible this was done.  It was rushed and didn't create a picture.  I hope this has done a better job and made it more of something you can connect and feel with. https://www.wattpad.com/story/23408878