LazyGwirl

Hey I saw your critique on unicorns book, and I thought it was very honest. And that's what a constructive critique is all about.
          
          If you don't mind, Ive started a book called "wig snatched" and I'd really like someone's honest opinion on the first chapter. ♥️
          
          Honest commentary and feedback, is what a book sincerely needs, for great progression❤️

LazyGwirl

@LibrasWriter Thanks for considering♥️
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UnicornsForeverBaby

You are rude to my sister's boyfriend you jerk 

RandomGuyNextDoor

@UnicornsForeverBaby First of all I know neither you nor "the boyfriend of your sister", second do you expect me to apologize? All I do is criticising, not like you randomly insult others on the internet, which is more than just a tad immature
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dyingQueenC

Danke für die Votes und Kommentare. Hat mich sehr gefreut ♥️.
          Für weiteres Feedback (Kritik nehme ich auch zu Herzen) wäre ich dir sehr dankbar.Ich habe schon neue Geschichten geschrieben, muss jetzt aber erst einmal Mathe lernen. (ich weiß, unnötige Info) 

RandomGuyNextDoor

@ToteQueenC Ja kann ich machen und viel Glück bei Mathe xD
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Alice_Reverie

Greetings!~
          
          Thank you very much for putting Mai in one of your reading list, favoriting it and commenting. (⺣◡⺣)♡* 

Alice_Reverie

:) If it's not a hassle, feel free to comment some criticism and feedbacks to some of my stories. It would really help me make them better. Thank you. 
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