Sneak-peek #2: Fabled Marvels + Vote
Chapter 5: Something to Remember
"I automatically toned them out before walking away when they were finished, I felt only emptiness. This cold feeling of displacement lasted only until I reached my home, when I finally got inside I couldn't help but collapse against the door, slowly falling into a seated position. I don't think I can take this any longer, my constant worrying, my longing to see them, and the amount of disappointment each year when I get rejected is too much stress to handle...maybe...maybe my husband was right for once. I stayed laying on the floor for what felt like hours until I finally dragged myself to my feet. With effort, I slowly inched my way towards my bedroom and threw myself onto the bed and under the sheets, I wish I could just see my family again, I wish I could know if they were okay...I wish...I just wish to be a mother again...My eyes felt heavy now, I slowly felt myself drift away and fall asleep with that wish still lingering in the back of my mind."
Would you all prefer a more descriptive style of writing in my stories?
A) Yes
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