@Minficz it was overall great ❤️ Especially for such a difficult genre. You have great humour and characterisation. The ending did feel a little rushed in the lack of details about how they pulled everything off (e.g. stabbing Hobi, infiltrating the island, where JK went after the cell cuddling), but I might be the only one missing it cause as you pointed out I have watched a fair few crime investigation/thriller shows and movies Also I might have felt slightly Jikook deprived at the end of it all but that’s just because the story obviously had them separated for a lot of it. Like that’s not a criticism just me missing them Especially since you wrote their moments so well. I think I have probably commented on everything else I can think of as I was reading it? Unless there’s something specific you’d like my opinion on? Thanks for replying to my comments so much too - most authors don’t seem to and it was fun (sorry not sorry for triggering you with the Tae jokes haha)
