Raptor71

New chapter of Wojak Story Time is out, Jeff joins a Fraternity
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Not_a_guy5068

Opinion on something for the new book. Should I give Tyrant a villain song? 
          
          If so, could you perhaps help me make an original one for him?

Not_a_guy5068

@Raptor71 (https://discord.gg/bDB82syM) This is the discord I've made for the Sharptooth series. Ill post this on my account as well.
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Not_a_guy5068

@Raptor71 just sent a friend request, username is Sharptoothglazer
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Not_a_guy5068

Hello again!
          
          
          I wish to know your predictions of book 4 in the Sharptooth saga.
          
          How do you think things will turn out?

Not_a_guy5068

@Raptor71 Very detailed analysis! I'm still working on figuring out the development, though I know where I want the plot to go. 
            
            And of course, since this book will be a war, there will be quite a few dark moments, and some more light shed on Tyrant's villain arc  (And why he's the way he is now).
            
            Wondering if Tyrant should live or die, especially because of how understandable his goal is, but the things he cost himself to reach it.
            
            Regina will definitely be on a hero arc, and do more in this book than any of the previous three.
            
            Overall, it will be peak.
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Raptor71

@Not_a_guy5068 *Redclaws going to Try to
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Raptor71

I think Redclaw's going to try convince Sharptooth to ditch defending the herd and valley, have the two of them just desert. I'm also looking forward to all the plot and character devlopment potential between Redclaw, Sharptoth and the Littlefoot gang. 
            
            Also sorry for the late reply
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Not_a_guy5068

Hello again!
          
          I wanted to ask your opinions on ending the Sharptooth King now and making a fourth book in the series.
          
          I feel like I have a lot to cover, and I don't want to rush the book to the end just because I want to get the book done.
          
          Besides, I think that it will give me the time to continue developing the characters, and possibly working on some other projects.
          
          But what is your opinion?

Raptor71

@Not_a_guy5068 I liked both the new chapters. I can't really think of any new feedback, but am looking forward to reading the 4th book!
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Not_a_guy5068

Coming to you for that juicy feedback!
          
          How are you liking(or disliking) Tyrant so far? Think he's a worthy foe of Sharptooth and the Great Valley?

Raptor71

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@Not_a_guy5068 I like the power scaling with how Tyrant is an actual threat. Though some of his actions are morally bad or gray, because he's a villian. His logic about carnivores needing to kill greeneaters for the survival of their species is refreshing compared to (old) Redclaw. Who used to just be bad because he was bad. Overall, Tyrant's a decent villian for the setting
            
            I also had some other ideas/conflict suggestions though
            
            1. What is Regina doing now? She obviously defends Tyrant because they're siblings, but will she tolerate him openly trying to kill Sharptooth? Even though her and Sharptooth last ended on a bad note, based on her character, I would assume she would at least be upset with Tyrant for this and for Tyrant killing her father in law (Sharptooth's dad)
            
            2. What is Sharptooth fighting for right now? His Dad is dead, Regina and him are temporarily and potentially permently estranged, and his former friends, the Littlefoot gang, hates him for being a relapsed greeneater killer. The only positive relationship he has is Redclaw
            
            3. I think there is a lot of plot and character devlopment potential with Redclaw, Sharptooth and the Littlefoot Gang all being in the group against a greater enemy, Tyrant. How is Sharptooth going to get Redclaw and the Littlefoot gang to be on the same side, especially since the Littlefoot gang hates Sharptooth for killing again?
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Not_a_guy5068

Lol, coming back from hiatis! Currently at Job Core, in my dorm.
          And I'm using my phone now instead of a computer.
          Hoping to get Sharptooth King done!

Raptor71

@Not_a_guy5068 Nice, I'm looking forward to reading the new chapter! If it is personal I understand, but what are you studying to become at Job Corps?
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JoelleSC

@Raptor71 Raptorrr!! I'm doing good myself, though I haven't been on Wattpad much for a few months now, and I think I'm also slowly phasing out of it. But when one door closes, the other opens, and I've managed to reignite my other artistic passion for art! Wbu? 

JoelleSC

Raptor! I missed you! How've you been? 

Raptor71

@JoelleSC It's great that you're getting back into making art! I would love to see photos
            
            I've been reading, but haven't made anything recently on Wattpad
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Raptor71

@JoelleSC Hi Jollee! It's going well, how are you?
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Not_a_guy5068

How would you feel if the Sharpteeth in the discord server opened up a restaurant in a future chapter?

Not_a_guy5068

@Raptor71  definitely! My headcanon for the discord story is RedClaw is pretty old, and so doesn't have the best mental state.
            
            He's also a big time simp and shipper!
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Raptor71

@Not_a_guy5068 If they open a resturant, I'm expecting numerious health code violations, general chaos and at least one call to the fire department. 
            
            Redclaw is also definitely a primary instagator of crashouts. He is also very sus with a lot of his comments
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Not_a_guy5068

RedClaw is definitely going to make them all crashout at one point or another
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Not_a_guy5068

How much aura does Tyrant have(in your headcanon)?

Raptor71

@Not_a_guy5068 Tyrant's aura scale reading is almost higher then Sharptooth's weight. He's a competent villian, and overall I just like how he really effectively strategizes for the long run. He values success and created a meritocracy, where the best serve as his commanders/advisors. He doesn't prefer diplomacy or violence, but rather chooses whatever means is most effective for getting him closer to his goals.
            
            He's also created this reputation as a beneviolent and wise ruler, but underneath it, he's just selfishly doing whatever will give him more power and influence.
            
            His name combined with the red eyes is a little cheesy, however it's not super outlandish. 
            
            I'm curious as to what he's actually like in a fight, but I'm not sure if it's in his personality to risk himself like that.
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