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@Not_a_guy5068 I like the power scaling with how Tyrant is an actual threat. Though some of his actions are morally bad or gray, because he's a villian. His logic about carnivores needing to kill greeneaters for the survival of their species is refreshing compared to (old) Redclaw. Who used to just be bad because he was bad. Overall, Tyrant's a decent villian for the setting
I also had some other ideas/conflict suggestions though
1. What is Regina doing now? She obviously defends Tyrant because they're siblings, but will she tolerate him openly trying to kill Sharptooth? Even though her and Sharptooth last ended on a bad note, based on her character, I would assume she would at least be upset with Tyrant for this and for Tyrant killing her father in law (Sharptooth's dad)
2. What is Sharptooth fighting for right now? His Dad is dead, Regina and him are temporarily and potentially permently estranged, and his former friends, the Littlefoot gang, hates him for being a relapsed greeneater killer. The only positive relationship he has is Redclaw
3. I think there is a lot of plot and character devlopment potential with Redclaw, Sharptooth and the Littlefoot Gang all being in the group against a greater enemy, Tyrant. How is Sharptooth going to get Redclaw and the Littlefoot gang to be on the same side, especially since the Littlefoot gang hates Sharptooth for killing again?