Not_a_guy5068
Okay, update and question.
I took down the latest two chapters as it moved the story forward too quick. I need to focus on Regina's growth and her plan to stop Tyrant more.
I also decided to not add a song, as it didn't fit in the story at all.
That being said, how do you think I should proceed with the Regina plot? And should there be conflict in the valley as Tyrant approaches?
Raptor71
@Not_a_guy5068 Maybe there could be other actors, besides Tyrant, who want power in the Sharptooth pack. Regina could face the dilemma of lending support to an ambitious sharptooth in mutiny against her brother. Alternately, I thought the plot of her turning others towards peace worked well. There could be conflict in the valley, I thought the council's dynamics was interesting
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