Rapunzel1521

I've begun the delicious but slow process of another round of proof-reading, and apparently when I pasted the parts from Google docs not everything got added, and some stuff got all jumbled. So for now Part 1 should make a lot more sense and flow a bit better! Tomorrow's project shall be Part 2! Stay tuned, and as always thank you so much. :] I still wanna hear any suggestions you may have!

Rapunzel1521

I've begun the delicious but slow process of another round of proof-reading, and apparently when I pasted the parts from Google docs not everything got added, and some stuff got all jumbled. So for now Part 1 should make a lot more sense and flow a bit better! Tomorrow's project shall be Part 2! Stay tuned, and as always thank you so much. :] I still wanna hear any suggestions you may have!

Rapunzel1521

I've just joined this site so excuse my clumsiness!!
          
          I just published the first couple of chapters of my novel, The Water Within. For the complete book please send me a message or comment or whatever it is you do here to get feedback! Oh, and speaking of which please feel free to rip my book a new one!!! I need all the criticism I can get if I want to publish it one day!! Thank you so much!!!
          
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