miyaki

Hi,
          How are you doing,
          I am new at publishing book and this is my first book.
          I need someone to check it and tell me how is it. Can you please help me do check it out 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/331931446?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Vmoon9&wp_originator=WbBo%2FUuXFqUj15K6UX%2FyMOuJVINFAkNfwMnfNWqTG28kowe%2Bxt9Z2BgJwclgl947g7SwMxa7QtgpiI1XvkCSm6S3s4R9YHf%2BKcvkZXHK84TgiHFx3bEncFgGagbFG%2FOC

Thanks a lot for the follow!