Raskzak

Hi,
          	From now, I intend to rework the sooner chapters of the story. I aim to improve the dynamics, content, and readability, all without modifying the story itself.

LittleCrow_English

@Raskzak | This is awesome! I can't wait to see how it turns out.
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StalkerVan

When are you going to update the "human in wings of fire"?

StalkerVan

@Raskzak oh okay I just reread it again and it's beautifully written. Keep it up!
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Raskzak

@StalkerVan I am currently rewriting slightly the earlier chapters of the story, some have already been updated
            this will take a little time, but I want to do it before tackling book 3
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StalkerVan

Your story on "human in the wings of fire" is beautifully created! I hope you can improve it!

StalkerVan

@StalkerVan I'm just wondering on when is this update? ? ?
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StalkerVan

@StalkerVan I'm just saying that I have that feeling but anyway I highly appreciate your story about this book 
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Raskzak

@StalkerVan ah well, you are somewhat completely right, and completely wrong
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PetiteCorneille

I love your Wings of Fire story with the human, it's really well written.

Raskzak

@PetiteCorneille ahahah oui merci, j'avais deviné pour toi en regardant ta liste lol
            
            Content que ça te plaise, je travaille sur le prochain chapitre, attend toi à une destruction de timeline en bonne et due forme ;)
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PetiteCorneille

Je viens de voir que tu étais français XD. J'aurai due lire plus attentivement les commentaires de ton premier chapitre "introduction". En attendant, j'attend impatiemment la suite de tes écrits.
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digimonking49

I have some story ideas for my character in your wings of fire story 

digimonking49

@Raskzak ok, it was just a suggestion. I can't wait to see my character 
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Raskzak

@digimonking49 it wouldn't make sense for a Rainwing to be present near Skywing activity, they don't leave the Rainforest, and Skywings don't go in. And if your character changes city, it's even less likely he'd meet back with a dragon that lives miles away; it wouldn't work the way you describe it
            
            it's not impossible for a scavenger to find a Rainwing if he's in the Rainforest tho
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digimonking49

@Raskzak I hope you've seen my previous message 
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