The book 'Bad Ass Love' is a romantic comedy with the protagonist as horny and relatable as any teenage girl. I love the plot and basic story line, it always keeps you thinking about what will happen next.
I like the characters and they're traits but they could use a bit more work like are just there and explained by they're outside appearance but not about the actual person. Normally, a side character shouldn't be explained that much appearance wise since they aren't going to be used a lot, spend more time focusing on the main protagonist and antagonist.
I like the consistency of the story, the next chapter always fits perfectly for the other.
Something I'd like the author to work on is spelling, grammar, and spacing. Spelling and grammar are obviously essential but some new authors dont understand how hard it is to read when your chapters aren't spaced. Space out your dialogue and make paragraphs, it doesn't have to be all one paragraph.
What helps me be more successful in my writing is reading other books and take inspiration from them. I read Carry On and a lot other BL books and I truly got the essence from them so I can write that in my book.
Tip: take your time with chapters! It's better late and good quality than on time and bad quality. Nobody is going to hate you if your late, trust me.
Overall, it's a good story for sure, would recommend.
