lucyrea23
Hello I'm a noobie wrighter and I need help with a fic I have an idea for but I'm not sure how to start it can you help?
Raven-23-03
Raven-23-03
It's about time I say I hate my books.
My first book SUCKS. It has so many fillers, and it's just ugh. I don't like it. I have one chapter I like? Where Ghost is talking to her own conscience or whatever. I'll finish it, because I hate leaving things unfinished. If I can be bothered, I'll edit it (as in rewrite everything with the same plot) until it's kinda okay.
I'm taking longer to write it because I want it to have an actual good plot. I
My truth or dare book is abandoned at this point. It's a lost cause that I wrote randomly, and it's cringy, I don't want to pick it up again.
The book of secrets is the only book I kinda like. Honestly, I work pretty hard on it, and I'm quite proud of it. I feel like I was original with it, and others seem to like it as well. I have a set plan for it that I'm sticking with, and I like where it's going.
Stuck is... Fine. It's in my better writing style. I actually published that one accidentally and went with it. I'll finish it in no more than ten chapters.
I'm working on new books. I have a dramatic type AU I'm dedicated to with a lot of LGBT ships. That'll take long to do. Will it be published soon? No.
I have an old-fashioned AU (using the names of the MCD villages) featuring two of my gay gals. I'm really into it! I was using Ghost and Kim, since I always start with them, but if I do, no one will care. So I'll probably change it to Melcinda. If I don't, it's either staying as a draft, or getting published though no-one'll care. It'll be a long book, and take time to finish.
I'm using it as an example of what type of writing I can offer. I believe it'll be one of my best works!
Clever04
@Raven-23-03 i personally love your first book. And at least all the fillers are good fillers! And it's better than entirely fluff or something.. Anyway, I love all your books. And I hope you continue writing, or just doing whatever you enjoy, and be proud of it!
Raven-23-03
@CandyDropMix heh, I suppose you're right! Thanks! By the way, I love your books, you're an amazing writer! "Forget Me Not" will always be one of my favourites. :)
CandyDropMix
@Raven-23-03 Don't be so hard on yourself! Writing, like most hobbies, always has a learning curve and your writing style may change as time goes on. It's better to look back and see how you've improved rather than look back and critique your past works. :D
VannaOWO
The best part about posting here is I get to piss Raven off
VannaOWO
Which is bigger gay?
Kimcinda or Raven
I VOTE RAVEN NOTHING CAN CHNAGE THAT
(Except fanfics)
VannaOWO
Welcome to late nights with Van:
What if one day you woke up and you were a chicken nugget
If you were made of food could you eat yourself
They say what goes around comes around, but that's not 100% true unless it's a boomerang
Orange is the only color you can taste
How often do I annoy Raven (everyday)
School starts in a month, welcome to hell
KIMCINDA IS THE BEST SHIP AND BIGGEST GAY
Raven-23-03
@VannaOWO NO I AM BIGGEST GAY You annoy me a little sometimes, not gonna lie, your late night texts are weird, but at least it's a cute girl- (hah, payback you nerd)
Raven-23-03
OI OI OI I'M BACK LADS
BUT FIRST ALLOW ME TO SLEEP FOR A CENTURY ANAOABOBKD
So, uh... First off, I'm going to go back and edit (or delete scenes) from my Truth or Dare book, and edit my first Garkim one since I hate it aheosbks
Stuck and the Book of Secrets can stay because they're cool!! Okay, maybe they aren't, but I'll leave them!!
All my books are way too heterosexual and it pains me.
Lastly gO FOLLOW @Xy-21-03 AND @Zai-22-03 BECAUSE THEY'RE AWESOME GUYS AND YEAH
They're my other halves, it isn't polyamorous I SWEAR!
Bye guys!
Clever04
@Raven-23-03 thank goodness, there isn't enough Garkim to satisfy my shipping needs and if you deleted it I'd be very sad! (heck yeah we should chat sometime)
Raven-23-03
@Raven-23-03 heh, don't worry, I won't! People seem to like it, so I'm only editing the first few chapters. Or rather, just the first one. That thing scares me... (Aww, thanks! I'm always on Wattpad, you just might not notice me. Been binging a bunch of fanfictions. My DMs are always open, though!) Don't mind me, I'm just sliding in and out of the chapter I'm writing...
Clever04
@Raven-23-03 wooah woah!! Are you going to delete the chess scene in the first Garkim? THAT WAS THE BEST PLEASE DON'T DELETE THAT (also I'm glad you're back I missed you uwu)
Raven-23-03
@GabyV123200507 *gg. Egg. AAAAAAAAA
emeralddeltaangel
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emeralddeltaangel
hey
hey you
yeah you right there
frickin-
HEY
LISTEN UP
you're an amazing person
people love you
you're a great fricking person
enjoy life motherfricker
you won't regret it.
Raven-23-03
@XBr0K3NS4t4NX aww, that's really so nice of you! Im sure the world will be a much better place since you're in it :)
emeralddeltaangel
@Raven2303 thank you. :) just a girl trying to make the world better, person by person :D
Raven-23-03
Love is just some empty filler for when you don't have anybody else to hurt but yourself.
