Raven-Rhapsody

Hey everyone!  I'm trying out a new writing style and I'd love to get some real feedback. If you've got a minute, please let me know what you think! Is it working? Should I keep going?

berrypie12

Hi! I’m your mentor for this week’s pairing. I see you’ve already left comments on my work. I apologize, I was to start on your book first so you see how comments are to be left but you beat me to it. There’s nothing much to worry about tho. By tomorrow, I’ll do my part so you see what you missed. Your comments were lovely btw. Thank you so much. I can’t wait to read your work ❤️

Raven-Rhapsody

@berrypie12 Thank you very much. Will make sure to do that next time
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berrypie12

@Raven-Rhapsody thank you! I enjoyed reading yours too, you’re a really talented writer. If you noticed, the only differences in our comments is the fact I tagged some SGEBC. Youre supposed to do that when suggesting something or praising the paragraph or body of text (it is required) also don’t forget to go back to the club page and comment status bliss/peace so you get paired with another member for this week. ❤️
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Raven-Rhapsody

@berrypie12 You're very welcome. I sincerely enjoyed reading your story
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Aatishified-ravira

Hey there,
          
          We'd been paired up for an assignment in EC Book club, but due to my final board exams on my head, I had to take a hiatus till 18th March. I will try to complete my part of the assignment, in between the hiatus. Might it take me till 18th March, also.
          
          My sincere apologies for any kind of inconveniences caused :)
          
          Ps. I loved each of your comments and reviews on my book! But, I didn't have the time to respond! I will do it, someday (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠)
          
          Thanks.

Raven-Rhapsody

@IrenicJ_stories Thank you for letting me know. No inconveniences caused here. Take your time and focus. My story will be here when you get back. All the best with your exams.
            
            Ps. I genuinely enjoyed reading your story. The plot is well thought out and easy to follow.
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LunarAquarius

Morning. Hey, you might want to try a different book club. Sunflower hasn't been active since last year.

Raven-Rhapsody

@LunarAquarius thank you ❤
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LunarAquarius

@LunarAquarius Well, there's Dreamland Exchange and Hunt. There's also the Esthetíque Book Club as well.
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Raven-Rhapsody

@LunarAquarius Hey, good morning... Thanks... Any recommendations?
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Therian_Overmaster

It seems like it has been forever since you last set foot in Wattpad but welcome back! I was formerely FanficFan50 and FkYouHackers.

Therian_Overmaster

@LSJLovename I haven't really been doing anything really, I've been writing here and there but that's pretty much it.
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Raven-Rhapsody

@The_Prodigious_One Yes, I remember you...I took a break to sorta improve my work and just started posting again. What have you been up to?
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