Announcement time:
Black & White will be moved to @Night_Sky-Sword in a the coming months, but the first book will be rewritten. New scenes will be implemented, some chapters will be longer compared to the original version, as I see that as a prototype (even though it was written by a 14 year old at the time lol). Characters will be changed slightly but given more depth, while others are gonna be changed completely. As for why I’m making these changes, I think it’s because over the years, I’ve read more mature stories, watched movies, and played games with interesting, complex characters that feel human. As an example, Santa Monica Studios reimagined their God of War franchise, and instead of making a story about hatred like they did with the original games, they took Kratos and matured him by putting him into the role of being a father. Another example is Rockstar Games Red Dead Redemption 2, another game I praise a lot for story and it’s characters, including the downfall of the Van Der Linde Gang.
So because looking at different types of media, books, games, and movies, I took notes and looked back at the stories I’ve published and…Wow, I have to say, I suck lol. But i honestly think it’s a good thing though. No one ever starts out great at something. You have to keep working at it, and take feedback, and take inspiration because that’s how you’re going to improve.