RavenRevoir

RavenRevoir

Thvnotme

@RavenRevoir y'all better vote and comment otherwise ⚔️⚔️ 
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RavenRevoir

NEW CHAPTER OUT Y'ALL!!!! GO VOTE & COMMENT 
          I just published "XXIII | Strategic way of death " of my story "   | THV |". https://www.wattpad.com/1591658585?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=RavenRevoir

taeshiNe_4

Itx so longggg i juxt wait now when itx complete then start reading again 
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Namjunior_577

Hey there hope you are doing great
          Its been so long since im reading your masterpiece and i must say this is something new and way better than what i have read in such a long time it would be so stupid to end it in middle of nowhere i just want to give you a few suggestions that may make the book more engaging and may increase its reach- adding more interactions ? Cause i have seen wayyy many people telling how they are focused more on the dialouges and interaction part and that describing everything in such detail may overshadow other good parts , maybe idk if i m the only one who feel it that the storyline is kinda slow and stuck ? Like after they had been to kt empire after that all alissa is doing is escaping and escaping ...im not saying that those parts arent good but maybe the thing is lacks of twsits or idk how to say 'kahani mein koi naya mode nhi aarha' somsthing like that maybe adding may get th readers hooked more ? Idk i just told what i felt like ...i would be happy if these suggestion help you and your book reach the limits they deserve