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story on a new website if anyone wants to have a look

I'm going to be posting a new story and I would love it if I could get some feedback on the first two chapters

First chapter of my story is being posted to my Wattpad account so anyone wanting to have a look at it can at RavenRoth20 on wattpad the story is called The fight at alfea please let me know if I need to make any changes as I’m writing it out with pen and paper then will be typing it up 

Does any one think this would make a good story if so then please let me know would love some help with ideas 
          https://my.w.tt/9jTMSSPXlQ

need help with writing another story my mind is full of ideas but I am having problems putting my ideas down on paper or computer 
          
          if anyone has any ideas on what I should right

I have began my writing again so I may post about it soon once I have written some of the idea that I have thought but if anyone on here has any ideas I would love to hear them so please let me know and I will work on those as well the ideas can be on anything but I would like it to be Fantasy but if it isn't that's fine too so please let me know ur ideas 

Rewriting a old story here is the summery for the story it's not that good but then again I have just thought of it Bloom and her friends are enjoying a bright summer day at ALFEA school for fairies that is till Bloom and Stella get into a huge fight which has Bloom passing out after the fight is there something wrong with Bloom and if there is what is it, will the. Wine girls be able to help her and save herself from her past. That good at making a summery but this story I had written before 

Hit a massive writers block but I'm still going to try and do some writing but with a whole new start as I love books based around fantasy and thing a like dragon fairies and other kinds of characters if anyone has any ideas own what I can write about please DM Mel

Thinking of deleting my Wattpad account and starting again with stories that I like to read and work on my stories that I'm always trying to write also gave up on the story ravens past

I'm writing a story but I need help with making a character plan if anyone has any tips for a character plan can you please dm me as the character plan is mostly for the story I have already posted