Ravenhearst
HSR Amphoreus arc is genuinely top three in the whole Hoyoverse game just below Thus spoke Apocalypse (HI3. My T1) and Elysian Realm (HI3 T2).
It beats Kiana's Everlasting flame comfortably. Amphoreus was genuinely only being let down by its bad pacing and bloated dialogues (which I didn't mind when my entire fanfics I've written are bloated just to pass word count. I shouldn't have done that)
Every character holds up on their own, bouncing off each other very, VERY well. But Phainon and Lygus were definitely the star of the show, leaving Cyrene at top 3 position in terms of cast.
Lygus - "Thus Speaks Genius Society #1, Zandar One Kuwabara."
(A GREAT parallel to the book, 'Thus Spoke Zarathustra` by Friedrich Nietzsche. It fits well with his theme, the Übermensch, The Death of God, the will to power, and eternal recurrence.)
(He honestly did it better than Otto.)
Phainon — "You have INFINITIVE chances to sway me into the future you want... And yet here we are. The score: 33,550,336 to 0. So tell me, Lycurgus — who's the real loser here?"
(The dynamic between these two. I want to cry.)
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Anyways, that's it. I'm gonna edit most of the stories to fit my new writing style. I extremely hate it. See you in a few years.
Ravenhearst
@lin_starsnigth it's always the pacing. I mean, it's definitely true that the story dragged too much. It's the reason why so many people didn't even finish the game or didn't understand it which leads to people skipping the story.
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lin_starsnigth
@Ravenhearst i see, strange to find a liking side. many user complaint about pace of story thought.
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