Ravenhearst

HSR Amphoreus arc is genuinely top three in the whole Hoyoverse game just below Thus spoke Apocalypse (HI3. My T1) and Elysian Realm (HI3 T2).
          	
          	It beats Kiana's Everlasting flame comfortably. Amphoreus was genuinely only being let down by its bad pacing and bloated dialogues (which I didn't mind when my entire fanfics I've written are bloated just to pass word count. I shouldn't have done that)
          	
          	Every character holds up on their own, bouncing off each other very, VERY well. But Phainon and Lygus were definitely the star of the show, leaving Cyrene at top 3 position in terms of cast.
          	
          	Lygus - "Thus Speaks Genius Society #1, Zandar One Kuwabara." 
          	
          	(A GREAT parallel to the book, 'Thus Spoke Zarathustra` by Friedrich Nietzsche. It fits well with his theme, the Übermensch, The Death of God, the will to power, and eternal recurrence.)
          	
          	(He honestly did it better than Otto.)
          	
          	Phainon — "You have INFINITIVE chances to sway me into the future you want... And yet here we are. The score: 33,550,336 to 0. So tell me, Lycurgus — who's the real loser here?"
          	
          	(The dynamic between these two. I want to cry.)
          	
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          	Anyways, that's it. I'm gonna edit most of the stories to fit my new writing style. I extremely hate it. See you in a few years.

Meraj8

@Ravenhearst Your reasoning and explanation are good. Also take your time.
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Ravenhearst

@lin_starsnigth it's always the pacing. I mean, it's definitely true that the story dragged too much. It's the reason why so many people didn't even finish the game or didn't understand it which leads to people skipping the story.
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lin_starsnigth

@Ravenhearst i see, strange to find a liking side. many user complaint about pace of story thought.
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Ravenhearst

HSR Amphoreus arc is genuinely top three in the whole Hoyoverse game just below Thus spoke Apocalypse (HI3. My T1) and Elysian Realm (HI3 T2).
          
          It beats Kiana's Everlasting flame comfortably. Amphoreus was genuinely only being let down by its bad pacing and bloated dialogues (which I didn't mind when my entire fanfics I've written are bloated just to pass word count. I shouldn't have done that)
          
          Every character holds up on their own, bouncing off each other very, VERY well. But Phainon and Lygus were definitely the star of the show, leaving Cyrene at top 3 position in terms of cast.
          
          Lygus - "Thus Speaks Genius Society #1, Zandar One Kuwabara." 
          
          (A GREAT parallel to the book, 'Thus Spoke Zarathustra` by Friedrich Nietzsche. It fits well with his theme, the Übermensch, The Death of God, the will to power, and eternal recurrence.)
          
          (He honestly did it better than Otto.)
          
          Phainon — "You have INFINITIVE chances to sway me into the future you want... And yet here we are. The score: 33,550,336 to 0. So tell me, Lycurgus — who's the real loser here?"
          
          (The dynamic between these two. I want to cry.)
          
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          Anyways, that's it. I'm gonna edit most of the stories to fit my new writing style. I extremely hate it. See you in a few years.

Meraj8

@Ravenhearst Your reasoning and explanation are good. Also take your time.
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Ravenhearst

@lin_starsnigth it's always the pacing. I mean, it's definitely true that the story dragged too much. It's the reason why so many people didn't even finish the game or didn't understand it which leads to people skipping the story.
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lin_starsnigth

@Ravenhearst i see, strange to find a liking side. many user complaint about pace of story thought.
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Erdrich

Ravenhearst where are thou, are thou ok?
          

Erdrich

@ Erdrich  oh dang, you live? Also yeah I understand you my college life was rough but interesting to the say least 
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Ravenhearst

@Erdrich college is rough. I'm just editing some of the stories that I already published in my free time since I heavily hated my writing style.
            
            So bloated holy shit—
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Ravenhearst

I wanna try a wuwa story ngl. Honkai already fell off for me since part 1.

Meraj8

@Ravenhearst Go ahead. It'd be a nice change for things.
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Erdrich

@ Erdrich also welcome back raven
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Erdrich

@ Ravenhearst  do it
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Ravenhearst

alright, since it's gonna be a while (Or a long time) for me to make a story and I did say I am working on botmaking as well, Here's something I've been doing ever since I put writing on indefinite hiatus.

Ravenhearst

Alright. I've made a lot of bots in a site Called JanitorAI. It's basically a chatbot site where you can create or RP bots you want.
            
            My Account is Star Venerable. You can find a lot of OCs there and some Non-OCs. I'm gonna make a bot later regarding Evelyn and Astra Yao from ZZZ
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Ravenhearst

@Erdich they hate sending links
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Erdrich

@ Ravenhearst, I assume you meant to post a link to something(unless I'm wrong) because I can't see anything if there's any
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Ravenhearst

Epstein list.
          
          I won't lie, I've been doing chatbots lately than writing stories.
          
          Idk, I'll make a rent story on my free-time with that reverse isekai plot.
          
          Do some of my other stories if I have the iota of ideas to continue it.

Sceptile799

@Ravenhearst Can’t believe you got a j*b. 
            
            Anyways, glad to see you back lol
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Ravenhearst

@Erdrich my god abandoned me to work In hell. Otherwise, pretty good. And same to you
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Erdrich

@ Ravenhearst the fallen and unseen raven has risen from the abyss(don't ask) anyway welcome back hope you have good day
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Unknown_RedX_V23

Huh. Idk when it happened but congrats on reaching 200+ follows.

Ravenhearst

@Ravenhearst too busy with life. I forgot I even have wattpad
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Ravenhearst

this message may be offensive
@Unknown_RedX_V23 on god I'm fucking dead lmao
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