⛈ Ade ⛈

Hi there, can you review my story and give me some constructive criticism. Thanks. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/282559365?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=eve_thestoryteller00&wp_originator=M1xWUFlayU07cf8YarCQUewm30%2F8GdB9Ju3xm0qmE4x%2B0zsJdWXIIvEl8jgDO3Qckb0eUUEH99X2fV7cCq2%2BIxopB9dllFF6EAp4sSntPCuT4zDupiG82rAAX2gqhuBQ

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