Raviyana

Wow it wouldn't let me post the whole thing. Okay, here's info on my work...
          	
          	Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation. xD

Raviyana

Wow it wouldn't let me post the whole thing. Okay, here's info on my work...
          
          Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation. xD

Raviyana

Hi everyone, sorry the weather was bad so I haven't been on in four days. Returning, I believe I am all caught up with my critiques. If you have messaged me within the past week and still haven't received your critique, send me a PM.

Raviyana

Hi everyone, sorry the weather was bad so I haven't been on in four days. Returning, I believe I am all caught up with my critiques. If you have messaged me within the past week and still haven't received your critique, send me a PM.
          
          Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation. xD

Raviyana

Hi everyone, sorry the weather was bad so I haven't been on in four days. Returning, I believe I am all caught up with my critiques. If you have messaged me within the past week and still haven't received your critique, send me a PM.
          
          Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation.

Raviyana

Hi everyone, sorry the weather was bad so I haven't been on in four days. Returning, I believe I am all caught up with my critiques. If you have messaged me within the past week and still haven't received your critique, send me a PM.
          
          Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation. xD

Raviyana

Hi everyone, sorry the weather was bad so I haven't been on in four days. Returning, I believe I am all caught up with my critiques. If you have messaged me within the past week and still haven't received your critique, send me a PM.
          
          Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation. xD

Raviyana

Hi everyone, sorry the weather was bad so I haven't been on in four days. Returning, I believe I am all caught up with my critiques. If you have messaged me within the past week and still haven't received your critique, send me a PM.
          
          Meanwhile in my current work, I started writing the first chapter in first person, in Nulniya's POV. I SHOULD be posting it today, but it's a rough draft as I don't know if I want to do 1st POV yet. (Although writing it has been fun so far.) Still on the fence about this, but I'm doing it anyway as an experimentation. xD

Raviyana

Happy New Years, everyone! I just returned from vacation and see that I've been bombarded with critique requests. Today, if the time permits me, I will be getting to all of you. Thank you for all of your patience! And hope you all had a wonderful holiday!

Raviyana

Hi guys,
          
          Putting a hold on A Shift of Luck for a short while I revise it a bit. After rereading, I see how jarring it is switching from Nulniya's POV to Bast's. I need to slim down on that a lot so I will be editing my chapters so that they primarily focus on Nulniya. But I will be switching to Bast's POV as well, just not as sudden as I have before. These two characters are still dual-protagonists, but this is still Nulniya's story. 
          
          If anyone has any tips with switching multiple POV's in a scene, don't hesitate to PM me! I'm always open to learning. :)

quiarahb

Will be waiting for the update. I agree with the above post. Great points made. :) 
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Aywren

@Raviyana No problem! Feel free to drop a line if there's anything you want feedback on, as always. :)
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Raviyana

@Aywren Thank you so much! I may just do that as well. :)
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